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Jordanavitch

  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: An Ode to Byron

    I was fortunate enough to hear Andrew perform this poem and the internationally recognised 'poetry and pints night' when he came to my university, and I have to say the ...

    Mar 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Satire Re: The Gods of Love

    Ladies and Gentlemen set down your laptops, stand up at your desks, put down you phones, draw a breath and applause, and continue to applause until such time as your ...

    Mar 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: My Goal

    Some beautiful enthusiasm here, my friend and I hope you never lose this! If I were you I would take this poem and try to fit it into another form, ...

    Mar 11, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: "you're not funny"

    Difficult to work out as it really isn't in any sort of form, and a lot of the writing is weak, such as "they wouldn't listen if your neck was ...

    Mar 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Innocent Criminals

    A really interesting form, that makes reading very easy. A great deal of ambiguity as well that is quite nice, however I feel you shouldn't take it too far. There ...

    Mar 10, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: an open letter

    This poem gets better as it goes on, however I think you need to be careful to avoid cliches like 'locks and chains' however there are some quite interesting thoughts, ...

    Mar 10, 2013


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