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Re: An Ode to Byron
I was fortunate enough to hear Andrew perform this poem and the internationally recognised 'poetry and pints night' when he came to my university, and I have to say the ...
Mar 11, 2013 -
Re: The Gods of Love
Ladies and Gentlemen set down your laptops, stand up at your desks, put down you phones, draw a breath and applause, and continue to applause until such time as your ...
Mar 11, 2013 -
Re: My Goal
Some beautiful enthusiasm here, my friend and I hope you never lose this! If I were you I would take this poem and try to fit it into another form, ...
Mar 11, 2013 -
Re: "you're not funny"
Difficult to work out as it really isn't in any sort of form, and a lot of the writing is weak, such as "they wouldn't listen if your neck was ...
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Re: Innocent Criminals
A really interesting form, that makes reading very easy. A great deal of ambiguity as well that is quite nice, however I feel you shouldn't take it too far. There ...
Mar 10, 2013 -
Re: an open letter
This poem gets better as it goes on, however I think you need to be careful to avoid cliches like 'locks and chains' however there are some quite interesting thoughts, ...
Mar 10, 2013
