Jony

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Hello! Thank you for the review, may I request you go back and review your critique? I appreciate the feedback, it would just be more effective for you as a ...

Grammar feedback much appreciated.

Thanks for the awesome review! It means a lot.

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I was generalizing and using stereotypes for both gays and straights on purpose to show how society deems what stereotypical category people should fall under. Also I was using bluntness ...

I know what gay means, and the point I was trying to have come across is that society still labels people gay based on those stereotypes, even though they shouldn't. ...

Thanks for the review though!

I'm not saying all straight people are like that, I mean I'm straight. I was just pointing out some of the stereotypes that society thinks all straight people should fall ...

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I think that what the author was trying to get at in this poem, instead of saying that Christianity is knowledge, is that those who celebrate the religion don't just ...

Thanks for the amazing review! And just to clear something up, there is absolutely no correlation between the word feel and the act of crowing, just like there is no ...

Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it!

Thanks for the review. And I would just like to clarify some things based off some of your comments. 1. Peter was already running late to school and would of ...