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Re: No Longer Flowing
Hey, its Jolley10101 here with a review. This poem was extremely awesome, as a writer I can totally relate to this! Things I really loved about this poem: I loved ...
Aug 1, 2021 -
Re: It hurts; I don't care
This is a very well done poem! I felt the emotion you put into this poem really well! Somethings I loved that you did was the repetition of "It hurts" ...
Jul 28, 2021 -
Re: Mermaid
This was a very beautiful and insightful poem. Things I believe were great- I believe the very end got really good: 'and here, I sunbathe oxygen cleaning the water from ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: Blissful Abyss
Hello, this was a great poem, overall it put me in the speakers mind. What I loved was how the beat symbolized a quicker pace with the angry mood of ...
Jan 29, 2017