JolieSari55

Sooo... I came upon this by chance. I was just glancing through things and found it. I wasn't really planning on commenting but, well, I couldn't help myself. I love ...

Well, I’m intrigued. What is their history? What lies have been spun? What will he do? I was defiantly caught up it…. so nice job! As for my critique, it ...

I really like your main character, however depression prone she may be. She’s got that “I hate the world attitude” which most kids in their teenage years can relate to. ...

I like anything with wolves… so, I liked it. Lol. It was good for being a “spur of the moment” sort of thing. Actually, if you wanted to make it ...

Don’t be discouraged. I read a lot of your reviews by the others and I am baffled by their lack of compassion. Your story is difficult to get into and ...

You know what this discussion reminds me of? When you’re in high school a teacher tells you how to think about a passage. I remember my teacher reading a poem ...

A story isn’t a story unless it’s going somewhere. While you do have some cute characters… what is going on? How’d they come to be on this date? I just ...

If was six years old and my daddy came to rescue me… I wouldn’t question it. He’s my daddy. I’m six. In that view he is the best man in ...

Wow. A lot of anger- I could feel it. You definitely tapped into the reader’s emotions. Death is a scary topic and, while you handle it well, I thought it ...

I liked it. I'm very in to the whole vampire/werewolf scene. However, I think it would be better if it was developed... What I mean is, where's the point? Yes, ...