Joker

Repetition can be a powerful tool, but you've perhaps used it a little too much for my liking here. It's clear that you're expressing something very important here. This poem ...

Thank ya very much :).

Beautifully spoken. I agree with you, and share your feeling.

Gritty. Unforgiving. Excellent. I like the way it actually makes me feel like shit :P.

Haha, there's something both funny and rather creepy about this. Very entertaining!

Thanks, man! Throughout my Undergraduate, I concentrated on performance poetry, which is what I write. The philosophy that you can force a reader to read something in the way you ...

This is nice. My criticism would be that it's very obvious. You've painted a very clear picture of what you're talking about, but it gives very little room for the ...

I always love these sorts of stories. Test subjects. Holding cells. Escape. Great stuff. I noticed a couple of errors here, though. "then it would fix" should be "than." Also ...