JohnLocke1

Hello, my friend. First, ah! A story about magicians! How I do so love magicians. The Bartimaeus Trilogy, for example. I wrote my own story about magicians, though it takes ...

Hello, my friend. First, might I say that you have a very bold, dramatic writing voice. Your blunt descriptions of the final moments of this girl and the fox drew ...

Hello, my friend. First, once again, I love your writing. I do not often read such truth, but you have placed it before my eyes. It is a welcome gift. ...

Hello, my friend. First, you have drawn me in with your writing. Once I saw that this was realistic, I groaned. I detest all realistic fiction, but I read on. ...

Hello, my friend. First, might I say that I respect you for writing in the present. I detest it myself, for I do not have the ability to write in ...

Hello, my friend. First, may I say that you are a fantastic writer. As well, I have finally found someone else who writes with multiple points of view! Ah! I ...

Hello, my friend. First, I loved this premise. The flashbacks, the small child. All of it. And, I was going to put this at the end, but you need to ...

Hello, my friend. First, let me say that I know nothing of the nit-picky poetry rules and whatnot. I can only really focus on how the poem made me feel ...

Hello, my friend. First, I do not usually focus on grammar unless I am requested to, since I am not gifted in that respect, so I will focus on other ...

Hello, my friend. First, allow me to say that I did rather enjoy your story. The premise was enticing and I found myself wanting to read on after your little ...

Hello, my friend. First, I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. Your writing created an atmosphere immediately and crafted an image of a world with ease. You were descriptive, but not to ...

Hello, my friend. First, a novel of this sort must have some way of explaining the mythos and the nature of the supernatural. Some writers forget that, so I applaud ...

Hello, my friend. First, let me applaud you for that twist. Novels of this genre usually keep the supernatural away from the public eye, but you have Blue bounding into ...

Hello, my friend. First, I loved this. I often struggle with moving on from the past, so I felt the lingering emotions within each line. The stanzas each seemed to ...

Hello, my friend. First, I think that this was a vital chapter. However, you didn't have to be so forward about it. Of course, learning about characters are important and ...