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Hello, LTF! I quite enjoyed this piece. You did a good job of drawing me in quickly. The voice used here definitely helped me get a feel for the foreign-ness ...

Icaruss, this is lovely! Honestly, I loved it. I have the attention span of a four-year-old, but you caught my interest and held it hostage. Cal is an adorable, seemingly ...

Ooh. This was sad, but also very well written, Ashley. I really liked it. It was strange, I felt like each part was it's only little piece, pretty standing alone, ...

Hi, Lizzy! You said this came from a creative writing assignment, right? Out of curiosity, what was the assignment? It might give me a better idea of what your goal ...

Hola! As said above, this was very nice. Kind of oddball, but also fun. My only suggestion would be the removal or reformatting of the introduction. It's impossible to tell ...

Hey, Callie. Ah, cynical poems. Fun, fun. Cool Things: The "message" of this poem, if you will, is great. I know things like that stir my anger, and this piece ...

Nice, Callie! This was really good. The personification and irony were well used. A couple suggestions: [DISCLAIMER: I'm freakishly nitpicky] And my prize is snatched out from in front of ...

AND ON TO CHAPTER DOS! I promise, this one will not be as long or as ramblesome. [IX. THE GRIEF COUNSELOR] Can I just say how fun this character is? ...

Sam! Yay for new, unexpected Samness. It was a wonderful birthday present, but I don't have much to crit, since the bases have pretty much been covered by Poem, Aedomir, ...

Aet: That is the deepest, most profound thing I have ever read. XD hehehe..funny... Snoink got married! Why wasn't I invited to the wedding?? Haha. Yes, Snoink, I would love ...

His blue eyes scanned the dingy room the domestic abuse shelter had given them. See my Chapter One notes on early physical description. Ronald turned from the window, failing to ...

Hey, Razorblade! Yay for this bit. I have wanted to read something of yours for quite a while, and now I finally have an opportunity. At least he’s original, Carolina ...

Ooh! I quite liked the ending, Syd. *suspense suspense* One thing that was kind of weird: “That was one tiny encountering,” Encountering? I'm almost certain that's not a word. Maybe ...

Ahoy, Jabber! Sorry it took me so long to get to Shocks 3. Rehearsals for the school musical started this week. *is sore* Anyway.... This was good. Once again, I ...

Haha. I recently asked myself the same thing. I have a friend who had to do a writing project that kind of revealed to him why he writes, but I ...