Jiggity

Well, yes they all die. The title should clear up any ambiguities in the text, I'd imagine, enough to say, clear any notion of each dog in question dying by ...

Yeah, I have room to flesh it out a bit now that I'm not constricted by a word count, so I'll probably add some of the details I left out, ...

Thank you both for the critiques (and June, who critiqued this story while YWS was down)! Jiggity -- Yep, he's an old man, and I don't know why you thought ...

Hey, Gryph, Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it. I'll get to those few questions you had next time, gotta run for now though! Just wanted to express my ...

Ack! Why has this been dragged from the depths? It was a small, flash piece for a contest. Nothing of import that people should be wasting their time on, though ...

Heh. You're always the first to my stories, Angel. Thanks for those comments, one or two I'd fixed beforehand, but I think that must have been as you were reviewing ...

The third thing I noticed was the stark reality of the monster, and the boy, and his mother. It was sharp. I could feel it slithering around in my mind. ...

This is pretty much a copy of World War Z: An Oral History of the Zombie War, a famous award winning novel by Max Brooks, soon to be a feature ...

Hey hey, y'all. Firstly, thanks for the comments. I always appreciate them. So, two issues you mentioned Moriah - firstly, ravens: an important motif for the story, given they are ...

Not one of my best, Cal? I wrote this a year ago! Lol, I feel all exposed and vulnerable; you're digging through the cemetery of my stories, bringing up old, ...

Ye gods, but I have to keep a rein on just what I'm writing and when. I have to say in reading this again, after your wonderful comments brought it ...

Ah! I totally forgot you were meant to look at this. I also forgot to mention that given the severe make over I have decided to give it (i.e turn ...

Aha! Yeah, that's what I was thinking of lol.

Indeed it does, Velvet. The idea behind this piece was to create a series of exchanges/monologues stripped of detail for ambiguities sake. Partly, it was because I wanted to see ...

Hey there, Velvet, Cheers for the message. Can I ask what you thought happened? I appreciate praise and criticism both, haha, This is nice, no doubt. Thanks again.