Jiggity

Thanks a lot Crysi, I cant help but notice though, that a couple of the quotes you used had already been edited. I updated not long ago, lol. Thanks for ...

whoa, thanks a lot tim, such messages are exactly what I need. I'll go about fixing it up once more. Cheers, ~Jiggy

Has noone anything to say? Nothing constructive? Not even a simple 'I liked it, it was good'?

Thanks a lot Crayon, all comments are ofcourse welcomed and appreciated. However, I know that this piece (which is unfinished) still needs to be "tightened" so I'll probably end up ...

*hits smaur on the head with a sledgehammer* I ment that the sentences would be difinitive and decisive if it weren't for the following "it had to be", "they had ...

in one clean sweet. one clean sweep It was nicely written, Misty, well done. The first few paragraphs were the best methinks as was the insinuation that stacey didn't really ...

This is not an RPG, perhaps I should have mentioned this earlier. Crayon has written from Shakyra's POV and I am willing to allow this. She hasnt posted it yet, ...

Sorry. If one was a man, then this could apply to him; hope you like it and think its fitting. ~Jiggy

Damn. Uh, that last post could be misconstrued. I left out the correction; there shouldnt be "for" in that sentence. But it was well written.

sacrificing age-old friendships for without a second thought Well written. ~Jiggy

Ah, I see. Its all good then, lol. And in reply to your signature I say, "Yes, very much so". Infact I wrote one...not sure if its as good though. ...

Thanks, I did what you suggested, lol.

Thanks for takin the time to comment. Ive changed the beginning, and I was wondering what you guys thought about it. Although, I did hear, indirectly, that the italicized beggining ...

I am aware of the effort undertaken by the critiquers, and I made sure in earlier posts to thank them. I am aware and i am appreciative. Doesnt change a ...

Okay then. Thank you all for taking the time to comment. I appreciate the effort. And thank you for killing the idea that I could write. I thought that I ...