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Well I'm in agreement with pretty much whats already been said. Not really helping, I know. Just wanted to say, 'Tentative.' Check title.

Very good. Hilarious. LOL, well done.

I have a bit to say on this. I'll come back and deliver the crit, when I have time.

It's well written, but I agree with 'dette, there's not enough to go on. There needs to be more for us to go on, rather then just a short description, ...

Um. Yeah. Loved the first stanza. Got lost in the second. I liked it but, twas weird.

I havent got much to say on this one, other then for an 11year old giant who has lived for 34years, Boom sure cries a lot. Thing is, most 11 ...

That post was almost two week ago. Get a move on!

Thanks Pat, and to all who responded. I've never really designed poetry to have an effect. Sometimes I just need to write it; its an expression, a way for me ...

LOL. I like Brad's post where he's responding to the critiques. The repition of 'best' is funny. Awesome. Love the reverseded-ness.

Thanks a lot for takin the time to respond. Tis appreciated.

I didn't sugercoat it! I told you I was confused and thought it was abstract, and your right when you said we had established the main cause of the confusion, ...

Shut up. What, because you don't like it, I should get rid of it? Whatever. I like it, its my piece, and others do as well. Just because you don't ...

Why the rulers of Dirantyr had decided to build the Academe so close to Gypsie territory no one was certain, Awkward sentence. Maybe: No one knew why the rulers of ...

Cheers all, thanks for takin the time to read and reply.

Excellent. Thank you for the reply, tis appreciated.