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Heh, that should have been the title. Truth is Stranger then fiction. Makes sense, actually. Thanke for the comment. Is there any particular reason you sounded like an old englishmen ...

Thanks everyone for your comments and help. Glad y'all liked it and I'll take a look at ths alleged over-description lol.

Ahem, well thank you. I appreciate you takin the time to read and respond.

Cheers for the comment. Huh, Id almsot forgotten about this lol. Thanks again.

Proper formatting!! Spaces!! Fix this and I'll come back and crit.

So, ah, I take it you liked it? I think you were quite right with the constant 'had' insertion so I changed that a bit. As to the child's perspective ...

LOL -- I dont think thats going to happen hahah, she seems to be in good health. Although that wrestling idea seems good! Mwahahaha, lol. I may actually be coming ...

Yeah, I found that unlike some rhyming poems this was not forced and it flowed really well, that is, until the second last stanza which seemed just a tad off. ...

Yes it was really real and no Inertia I dont see him anymore; not too long ago he stopped going to the library. He reappeared once, not long ago, but ...

Hmm, I was just going over my old stuff -- am very bored-- and noticed this again lol, so i finally made those tweaks and changes ... apart from the ...

I loved the movie and the book spent most of my time this year analysing it and using it as a supplementary text to the novel Huckleberry Finn. But I'll ...

Hahahaha, lol, thanks a lot Fand. It is quite ridiculous; I'm glad you got a laugh out of it.

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, tis appreciated. I wanted to show that apathy of insomnia is so alike our daily lives and juxtapose that with the ...

But I'm tired .. can't Brad do it for me, lol. Of course I want to get better at writing poetry, but I hardly think its going to happen overnight. ...

Thanks a lot you two, your work is much appreciated. Bubbles, my brain isnt working too well, I am violently sleep deprived so my re-arranging and polishing skills are, like ...