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Hahaha, cheers. Keep in mind this was at 2am last night, with an emotional friend online. She was getting impatient so I had to cut it off short...bah, anyways. Thanks

You want a grown up crit? Lol, most of my crits are pretty much the same, regardless of the person. I make general comments on the story, whether it works ...

Spanke caddy, for your comment. Tis much appreciated. *pets* Cheers.

No problems, I'll definetly be working on it a bit more. Thank you very much.

Ahhh, okay. I see now what you meant by the realistic dialogue comment. Apologies. *hugs bubbles* Topic description "For Myth/Faerie contest" lmao :wink: I'll definetly think about revising it; I'm ...

Lol. First off, thanks Bubbles, for the effort. I understand what your saying completely, in reagrds to the folkishness of it, and how it would work better - as a ...

Awesome, thank you both very much. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece.

Ah, but you see, its not an eding at all. I was etting tired of writing it, and seeing so much writing so I put the first half of it ...

I got a Distinction for it actually, haha, it was my highest result and from one of the toughest markers ever. *dances* Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you liked ...

Then wierdness part I can understand, a friedn of mine agrees; he thinks too much has passed without explanation. I like to think that the explanation is slowly unfolding. But ...

This one was better though, methinks.

It is extroadinarily well done; quite brilliant really. I agree, Jack, there were several moments that almost had me in tears as well lol.

Poetic prose also belongs in the Poetry Forum. Somone kindly move it there.

Cheers for the comment, Tri. I was lucky to get this in on time as it was lol, not that it took me long to write, just that there was ...

Kitty--Thanks a bunch, I live to disturb. Imp-- It is not the best I've written for the Duel, no, but take into account the time factor here! Lol. Thanks for ...