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*pokes*

Sweet - glad you liked it. The second chapter is proving to be quite the persistant bugger, in that it refuses to end and die. I should post it later ...

Yeah, in Australia it's spelled with an 's'. I'm working on Chapter Two at the moment, twil be interesting to see where this goes. Thanks again.

Ah, nicely spotted. *Changed. Cheers and thanks, all, for the responses.

Okay, well, since there's been so much confusion perhaps it's the writing that needs to be fixed after all. I don't want it to be too much more then the ...

Haha,awesome. Thanks for bothering to read it - tis appreciated. It's definetly an interesting story so I know what you mean by wanting to read or see, more of it. ...

Ha, sweet. I'm glad you guys liked it. Cheers for the comments. Thanks, all.

Ah, thanks for the comments. This is the first chapter of an old story that I'm rewriting. I'm adding the rest of the chapter now.

It wasn't meant to be creepy per se, but it was dark. It is basically about a boy, without many friends, who is dared to go down to the graveyard. ...

Oh dear. I apologise - I just realised that I added the wrong attachment hahaha, I'm really sorry. The completed, short film (not radio as the previous version was) is ...

That's one option, yes, but I don't want to take it. A short story, whatever the length, is generally meant to be read and viewed in one sitting. If it ...

Download preferably - I can't post it in its original format, which is as it should be seen. It's only a short film script - 16 pages or so.

Ah, someone sees! I don't know about kicking them, but I certainly was disappointed a great deal. Everyone's entitled to their opinion and I'm so very, very glad about yours. ...

Oy, just a quick word before I have to run. The comments regarding lack of description are fine; there was never meant to be any. This, for me, was an ...

For those interested, I did a complete rewrite of this and posted it in Other Fiction. It is entitled, 'Hungry Generations'. I realised, during the rewrite, that I had lost ...