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Wow. This is, I think, exceptionally good, especially for a Harry Potter fanfic. There are millions of them and there all crap, bar a few, and this is one of ...

This is really well written and in fact I hesitate to say anything because I believe this would benefit from an in-depth critique which I just cant manage right now, ...

Yeah, I agree with Dammer, this is really good with a few minor things needing some light editing. Brinda stared down at her muddle reflection muddled. You do this a ...

This is really well done. I liked the idea that gems are used as currency, at least thats the impression I got. I disagree with Firestarter though, in regards to ...

Just quickly: This seems rather flat. Im not quite sure how to explain it, I think it has to do with the whole Showing vs Telling majiggy. The way it ...

This is really good. I must say though, that it seems quite stupid to write this with no intention of continuing or explaining of the circumstances in which it is ...

Rashtara’s fiery eyes glared at the chaos that ravaged below her small stone cottage that was built beside a large yawning cave entrance that led to the upper levels of ...

Jane Eyre is a literary classic, which encapsulates the struggle of the modern female, or indeed that of all females. Its a text full of textual integrity because it relates ...

Okay, so in general, Id just like to say that dialogue looks a lot better if its spaced out. There were a few spelling errors but a part from that ...

Well so far it seems okay. Ive got no idea about the description in regards to the alien species' or the accuracy of anything because Im not a SW fan. ...

That was extremely interesting and exceptionally well written. I mean, seriously there were very little errors, infact only one that I noticed. It was a little wordy, but on the ...

Well. First of all, I generally like it. Kinda. Okay, so for the beginning I was like, so what? This is so ordinary, blah blah blah, then I thought, hey ...

I thought this was great, very nicely written. And I'll agree with Lynn on this, 'indefatigably' is a mouthful that stands out like a brazen tramp in a crowd of ...

Im afraid that isnt a story. Its like I dont know, the opening part of the first chapter. Anyone the first line repetition of 'like' stood out and by that ...

Fantastic. Emotion was wonderfully expressed. Spaces would create a bigger impact though, use them, theyre quite effective. Al-Hamdulelah. Im so glad that this was written. Its nice to know there ...