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Hey Areida! You certainly should post more, m'dear. Yours is a simply style and it works so well. As for typos, there are three: and no breeze move through the ...

Hey there, Your speech tagging really needs work. You need to separate dialogue from action as well. "Stupid rapist," I mumbled, grabbing the head by the blood soaked curls on ...

We were reduced into nothing more than airy globes that barely twinkle while the earth below is washed in darkness. We were reduced to nothing more than airy globes that ...

Hey there, Ky Risky choice, putting this here. Tis mostly a graveyard, after all. Just one or two things I thought I'd point out. the same woods were I saw ...

Hmm. You tread a fine line between cop-out and greatness, haha. I think it's a really good short story, all told - probably your best, honestly. I really enjoyed it. ...

Dear Sur, I will never forgive you if someone doesn't get raped at the end of this. That is all. p.s I'm really enjoying this and no, this isn't a ...

Hey Sur, This is really good stuff, basic, simple exposition well executed. My only comment, really, is that all ginger-related comments within were hilarious and in effect, the highlight of ...

Hey Ky, Ha, still on pregnant women, eh? Truly a topic worth much ruminating. I really liked this, but I do think that the middle deviation into random exterior description ...

Orson Scott Card is pretty damn fantastic. Ender's Game is absurdly good and to Critiq - just so you know, pretty much everything in Science Fiction, is never, ever going ...

Hello, there. I find it odd that you haven't read much fantasy in which there are detailed sword fights, that's quite strange. I think perhaps you should broaden your reading ...

Right, well. I didn't enjoy this, I'll say from the start. However, there are positives to take from this! Mostly, what I'm impressed with is that you've made (in my ...

Hey Ky, you asked, and so I answer. On a general note, I haven't read The Elephant Boy - by the time I began seeing it pop up, it was ...

Hey Ky, Been a while since I stopped by, but here I am once more. I enjoyed this latest offering, but it didn't really blow me away. Character-wise and setting-wise, ...

Quirky and interesting. That's what I'm thinking. I really enjoyed this - you have the voice of the character down, comes across really vividly which is great. There are no ...

Hey Angel! I had a feeling you might recognise who wrote what. XD. Okay, we'll have to go over it and see about lightening the load here and there, see ...