JesusFreak

THat was really good. I dont under stand what the line "Just a clatter as his angel hit the floor." has to do with the rest of the poem. I ...

Over all that was really good. I did think though that some of the lines seemed to full and didn't flow with the rest of the piece. Another thing, though ...

I liked this a lot. The part that stood out to me the most was how you repeated the beginning of the song at the end. Since no one else ...

This is a good song. I like chorus a lot. I especially like the line "That is why I stand in the rain So no one can see me crying." ...

I thought that this was really good. my favorite verse is the second verse. It does a really good job of discribing the depth of the emotion. I think the ...