Jenthura

You should submit your second story to Silentpages' contest ! It's all about rocks, really.

Thanks a lot for the reviews, guys! Ranger - Yes, James was a semi-precious stone deep down. The wearing of the river and the grinding of the ocean reduced him ...

Reminded me very much of Docter Suess' works. I like it!

Thanks for the helpful review, Dudette! I'll certainly work on those (obvious xD) mistakes! As to their age, I couldn't decide, and kept wavering. however, since they do have an ...

Z, the user up there is Jash, not me...not Josh. :D

I thought as much. Don't worry about it, though, I remember looking at the other suggestions and thinking, "Who the heck would chose a lawn gnome?" :D

Thanks Rae! I tried to cut down a lot of words with the edit, but obviously not enough. Originally, the ending was going to be, "Slowly they turned away, shedding ...

Thanks so much for the reviews, guys! I'll work hard to make this better. :D @born2be: He 'walked among them' because they didn't know he was a thief. He was ...

Thanks for the thorough review! I've actually decided to go with another short story for the contest, but I'll edit this one too. I really appreciated this!

Review coming soon! I saw some spelling errors, and a few grammar errors, but the idea itself is good!

Ha! The moment I opened this, I knew you wouldn't get my name in it. :D *feels very pleased...for some strange reason*

Very strange... I'm not into poetry, so I won't try to review at all. (Prolly should'a said "can't review") Suffice to say, though, that I liked it!

Hey! I put it as an attachment because I didn't want to mess up the highlighters. Bbcode, Y'no?

great! It's weird how it got to the Featured without a single comment. :lol:

Well, I'd love to do a thorough critique, but Skins beat me to it. It's an awesome start, but, as Nikilow said it, it's rather confusing. I would slow down ...