JensenAcklesFan

Overall, this is amazing! I'd just like to say, when you said, "I want to make my parents proud of me," I think that you could scratch off "of me." ...

Thank you, and I get your point. I did use a lot of repetition, and I like the way you reworded that! It's difficult to make sure that everything is ...

I never thought about it that way, and now that I think about it, the lines are quite short. Next time, in the next version, I'll take that into consideration. ...

This is amazing, lovely, and quite extraordinary. Yes, fiction topics like this are very popular, but this is a very fine piece. You really should continue working, you are excellent ...

Thank you! I've written this over the drama happening pretty much everywhere around me, so I've got lots of inspiration, and I might just right more. I've been thinking of ...

I see what you mean, as I did leave things out. I actually am going to make more, keeping the same plot, same emotion, as a continuation, but different concepts. ...

Wow, Ryleigh, I've expected so much more from you. No, just kidding, sweetheart. Keep writing and try to proof read next time. Overall, it's not so bad, but editing goes ...

I honestly love Supernatural, and it's an addiction, as you can see from my profile, but to be frank, I found this deep and of course, Lucifer was God's favorite ...