Jennafina

clever idea to flip it.

She killed herself with dynamight? Interesting. I've never heard that before. Sorry... Not funny. I like how its got all these metaphores. Especially the first two stanzas and the last ...

Its simple, and not very memorable, but it's cute, and sure rhymes well.

Cute, sad, but a bit taboo. Its not exactly an original subject, but you did a good job to make it memorable. One thing It matures and continues life but ...

I Like it and can't find anything at all to critique!! Nice job. That type of thing has halpened to me to. Somone in my simphany died, and I couldn't ...

Wow that is too incredebly awesome for words and stick beating.. I LOVE IT!!! Cant really tell you why, apart from all the imagry, and atmosphere, and the dark, haunted ...

That was cute, and deap, but it didn't really seam too heartfealt. Thats probably just me though, and as a hole its really great! I hope you post more stuff ...

I agree with everyone else about the movies. The Harry Potter cast seam like they were picked for their looks.

I haven't read any either, but I read the DaVinci Code, and if Angels and Demons is the prequal I'll read it for sure..

What Chrisi said.. I like the format too.

I like how it has a dreamy quality, like a faded memory.. This is my favorite part. Was it me? I don't remember. I like this too. Probably because they ...

Thats funny. I like how its got big words.. where swan boats glide on fountains and Sophisticated People sip martinis and french kiss. We'll hide like elves behind the bushes ...

awww... :) Yeah, thanks for posting this! it rocks!

I didn't think it was that short, it seamed just the right length. but If you wanted to add more, id be interested to see the rest of the red ...

whats with the grapes? I never know what to say about peoples dreams either.