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Re: Because Of You
I absolutely loved this fine work of creativity! Not only that, but--and I know this might sound a bit silly--it seemed to speak to me. I mean, I find some ...
Sep 24, 2016 -
Re: deleted
Oh my goodness I loved this! There were just two small things I noticed. Everything else was so true and fantastic! Different kind of bees and different types of stings, ...
Sep 23, 2016 -
Re: There has always been smoke in the air
Hello! I absolutely loved this story. The details were fantastic! There is just one small thing I'd like to fix. The Grey Bush fire clouds turn into black billows, as ...
Sep 23, 2016 -
Re: The double life
Hi! I absolutely loved this, it was quite entertaining. As far as I can see, there are just a couple small things I kinda want to adjust. Until one day ...
Sep 23, 2016 -
Re: Goodbye
Hey Ashley! I absolutely love this poem--actually, I'm thinking about making a story now, I think I might call it Angel! Anyways, there is just one tiny mistake that I ...
Sep 23, 2016 -
Re: Emily and That One Time She Had Ice Cream With Satan
Well hi! ^^ I loved this short story, and it was pretty funny. I think there's just one thing I'd like to note--you split your story into past tense and ...
Sep 23, 2016 -
Re: Killer Beauty - PT I
Oh. My. Goodness. This was amazing!!! The details were absolutely fantastic, and the way you made Arlene appear so threatening back at the party was even better. Please don't mind ...
Sep 22, 2016 -
Re: She Shines
Well hey! I'm so thrilled to know that there's a new writer too, just like me! I absolutely loved the plot of this story. How I wish I could've come ...
Sep 22, 2016
