JenGwen

I thought your story was great. You gave a lot of information, that can be both good and bad. You don't want to bire the reader, but you also don't ...

I took your advice, is that better?

Wow cool, really liked it, had some real emotion behind it. I love greek mytholagy anyway, but this is going in my fave poems book.

the Inkheart series. Cant beat it.

really good. Do you have any others?

I liked it, but found it hard to stay with, I had to go back and read it again. I dont think it was very flowing, but better than i ...

Hey, thanks for the advice, it has been changed! Umm Yeh, Sienna did do all this and yeh (Unfortunately) she is real. Its baced on her life, but it cant ...

Yeh, i really liked it, could have a better title though i think. :D

Loved it, really, really good! Though the grammer could be better.....

Really really loved it!!! Cant say why, but so amazing!

Omg thanks! Sienna later on in the story has a foal, I have taken your advice and have changed it in my proper book, (Well not really a book, just ...

I loved it! really understood what he/she was feeling! The way it was written was really good too. well done.

Wow, really good! I really loved it! I think its really good the way you described everything in such detail. Well done! I would be one of the first to ...