Jem

Oh, I love this piece. I adore how you made the printer out to be someone that was once a confidant, describing your disappointment and anger. "You were supposed to ...

This is the most interesting take on a poem that I have ever read. I love how it is a form of a recipe, and the commentary is between the ...

At first I was waiting for a long poem on how writers block was so awful, and almost incurable. (A boy in my middle school english class wrote a long ...

Wow, this is really creative. It is an interesting take on the ugly duckling, something that I have never thought of before. I like the rhyming, it gives the piece ...

This is such a powerful poem. I could really feel the emotion and anger in it. Your descriptions and metaphors/similes are excellent. I especially like, "pump my stomach with this ...