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JayeCShore

JayeCShore

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Disney

    I won't disagree. But just think about it. What is the byproduct of hate and anger? And is that really what you want to come out of it?

    May 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Disney

    I do understand what you mean. And yes, Disney is probably one of the most influential companies in the world, so anything they do, or don't do, will be affecting ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Disney

    Then why do you force down our throats this idea of what is normal. I think my problem is that you are acting like they are forcing something upon you. ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Disney

    Disney's Frozen Will Teach Kids To Be Gay Disney Cuts Ties With Boy Scouts Over Anti-Gay Policy Disney To End Funding For Boy Scouts Over Gay Leader Ban Gay Days ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Disney

    I agree in some instances, but you have the choice to watch the movie. If you don't agree with the principles that are being represented or not being represented, you ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Falling

    I surely will consider that. Thanks again.

    May 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Falling

    I found myself laughing while reading your review. Most of what you said is true and sound advice. Had I written this today I would probably put it all in, ...

    May 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Escape From Rainbowland Chapter 1

    It's a pretty interesting combo.

    Apr 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Escape From Rainbowland Chapter 5

    They are on my list!

    Apr 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Escape From Rainbowland Chapter 5

    I forgot to push the button that changes it from a comment to a review. So I just posted it again as a review and deleted this comment.

    Apr 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Politics Re: Haters Gonna Hate

    Thanks for the review! And yes, the fifth stanza is a bit off. I think if I change the last line a little it will fix the problem.

    Apr 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: The Prince Who Charmed Himself

    Thanks. I'm glad my weirdness brings some happiness to people other than myself :D

    Apr 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: The Prince Who Charmed Himself

    Thanks.

    Apr 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Politics Re: Haters Gonna Hate

    Actually, you interpreted it perfectly. I felt inspired to write this when I saw a similar poem from the opposite point of few getting a lot of likes. It made ...

    Apr 28, 2014


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