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JayeCShore

JayeCShore

  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: I'm Drowning

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! First off, it's good that you put in the description that you wrote this to express what you are feeling. All too often I ...

    Apr 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Meanings of Colors

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! I must say, this was a beautiful poem. But I had mixed feelings. I really like the subject, content matter and story it tells, ...

    Apr 29, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, General Re: Life, Love, and Peace. It's pretty simple.

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! Well, it definitely was worth the read. It's rare that I read an essay or article of any sort that I agree almost entirely ...

    Apr 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: And

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! Well...it's a bit hard to write a review for such a poem, speaking honestly. There's not much to review, here. As a poem there ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: His Legacy - Chapter 3, Part 1

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! It's rare that I find something I enjoy reading enough to say the time was well spent. Not that I spend my time any ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Theirs

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! At first, I have to say, I was a bit confused, and annoyed, at the style of this poem. It seemed strange and very ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I wonder why

    Hi, JC here for a review! I like this poem, and I can't say exactly why. There isn't exactly a lot of meat on the bones here, but then again, ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I don't care.

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! While this may fit into the term 'poetry' in many instances and ways, I don't feel that it exemplifies the essence of poetry itself. ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Black Eyes Chapter 8: Prison Break

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! First thing I noticed is the length. If this were in a paperback form sitting on my desk with a neat little index card ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Let's Talk Chapter 2

    Hi, J. C. Here for a review! First off, I like your style. Of course, 'style' is a very general term and can't really be defined, so I'll change it ...

    Apr 27, 2014


Writing is like love: the real thing is a lot less romantic
— dragonfphoenix