JayShay

I know, I fixed it about a week ago on my computer, thanks lol

Honestly, the characters are based on real people, minus Casey. And Casey has been quiet since his brother died, as said in chapter two, he's not shy, he's haunted by ...

Oh and Terrance is fairly typical so it was a wild and very accurate guess as to wear he was while Cole was on patrol and it even says near ...

Time for explaining, Cole is a pyro, so he's more tolerant to heat. More of this will be explained later. And Terrance drives a Ford Focus

Time for explaining, Cole is a pyro, so he's more tolerant to heat. More of this will be explained later. And Terrance drives a Ford Focus

All I have to say to that is my original copy said the woods were on the right sorry for the confusion

For.starters there's no upstairs. And a lot of problems with tenses and things happened on my computer because the program I use isn't Microsoft word. Next, Terrance is older than ...

oh and also, it's means it is or it has, it doesn't have an apostrophe for possession since it's a pronoun, it's like saying his or her.

Thanks for your help, I guess I didn't try as hard here as I did with my first book, I'll defiantly fix it as I go, I'll post the new ...

Thanks lol, and my computer has a problem with autocorrect, I wrote waist but it went weird, I don't have Microsoft Word, I use a different thing, and I meant ...

Well for that last part of your comment, he didn't really know for sure who all was coming or how many, its normally a partnership but it gets busy sometimes, ...

I apologize for the triple post. Phone sucks. Also, for the gold eyes, the eyes are the windows to the soul. And some of that stuff is stuff are things ...

Haha no problem

Allow me to explain somethings, the characters are truly in tune to their environments and their feelings as they lived in a time and place where people are not concerned ...

Allow me to explain somethings, the characters are truly in tune to their environments and their feelings as they lived in a time and place where people are not concerned ...