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JasperSkye

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Phantom of the Opera Poem

    Well...Your sister did a very good job on the poem. I love the "I have been enveloped by madness" part. As for making her an account, make it. I would ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Dear Hanna

    Wow...I was in tears by the end of that story. I almost saw it coming, Hanna being killed and all but I didn't want to believe it. This makes me ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Built a Home

    I liked it. It was very interesting, and it made me want to answer the question as to : what exactly is a home? It's a question that I can't ...

    Jul 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: It's a shame

    I really liked it. Loved it, in fact. It was short and sweet. It reminded me of my friend that passed away not too long ago who I fell in ...

    Jul 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Story of You and I

    Wow...Beautiful. It almost had me in tears. Reminded me of my own lonliness and how I am just another person looking for "the one" . How one day my prince ...

    Jul 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: His and Hers

    I really liked it. I didn't quite get it at first until I re-read it and then it came to me. Very emotional in a way that doesn't describe the ...

    Jul 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: You Don't

    Beautifully written. I just adore it. It gave me this feeling I could not describe. It was as if i felt love and lonliness at the same time. Keep up ...

    Jul 21, 2011


We are not to simply bandage the wounds of victims beneath the wheels of injustice, we are to drive a spoke into the wheel itself.
— Dietrich Bonhoeffer