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Re: How a Teenage Heart Breaks
As a teenager myself, I can relate and agree that this is definitely how teenage love goes. Your use of repetition on the lines, such as "it bleeds and it ...
Apr 30, 2014 -
Re: Fill Me In
This poem is great, especially your way of preferring the strangeness to rain as opposed to the scientific explanation. Your imagery used in describing the sidewalk and yourself is superb, ...
Apr 30, 2014 -
Re: Inspired by a Lava Lamp
I absolutely love the imagery used in this poem. A lava lamp, which I happen to have one right next to me, can definitely be inspiration for this. I can ...
Apr 30, 2014 -
Re: Tomorrow is full of promise
I really enjoy the mystery you associate with tomorrow, as it truly is everything you described it as. Your use of anaphora is beautiful, and I love the positive tone ...
Apr 30, 2014 -
Re: a girl who may or may not be radioactive
As a reader of Homestuck, I feel that this poem perfectly sums up Jade Harley. The scientific references and approach to describing her personality are spot on, and worded wonderfully. ...
Apr 29, 2014 -
Re: Five Fail-safe Ways to become a Writer – The Official Guide
The style of this work completely makes it hilarious, yet insightful to writing! Although it may be a tad zany, it is very true that these are the feelings and ...
Apr 29, 2014