Jas

Hey, I love this. I can tell it will be featured. It was a great piece and my only nitpick is the '~~' squiggly things. Two of them should be ...

I on;y have something really quick to say. This should be in fanfiction considering it revolves around a character you did not create. I don't like the Twilight series and ...

Hey, I'm not getting why people are laughing. This doesn't seem like a very funny poem. Maybe I'm missing something. It's a nice poem, but your lines were pretty simple. ...

The Hunger Games & Catching Fire - Suzanne Collins Gone series - Michael Grant Uglies series - Scott Westerfeld Harry Potter series - J.K Rowling Thirteen Reasons Why - Jay ...

Hey, Hmm. I think I really liked this. I'm not sure though, I'll have to read the second chapter to be positive. This is very different from other annoying Angel ...

Heyo! Woah Jash. You have an incredible voice. It's all softlile and brilliant sounding. Never stop singing. Also, those lyrics are amazing. It reminded me of poetry in a good ...

Hey, I hate and love reading your poetry. Hate it because you make me feel like a terrible imposter of a poet. Love it because the vocabulary, story, imagery, everything ...

Hey, Woah. Snoinksy writes poetry goodliek! As you know, I'm a terrible reviewer but I'll try only on account of FREAK and it's epicness. So, I really liked this. It ...

Hey. At first I was confused on who was the MC. Then I got it. And I liked it. I don't have time for a full review but I have ...

Hey, I really liked this piece but I felt as if you ended it at a random timing. I know the point was to show 'Girls, wow, they're crazy :/' ...

Hey, As Chad said, this was trippy. I liked it which is weird because I don't like Sci-Fi much. Very eloquent piece but is too short for a in-depth review. ...

Hey, For your first attempt, this was very good! I thought this was a really cute, carefree poem and even though it was a *little* short, it was very sweet. ...

Hey, I didn't really like this chapter. It is very, very unlikely that their are two sets of twins in a family so I suggest taking changing that. In fact, ...

Hey, I'm sort of confused. I'm not sure whether this is a story or a prologue or anything. First of all, Welcome to YWS! :D Back to the story, your ...

Hey, I adore this. It was the cutest little piece and I love how you've had this girls best friend be taken away by this other girl, that may signify ...