Jas

Sometimes, when no-one is around, I dream of lying in a pool of blood -- not just any, mind you, no, the hand that drew the blood would surely be ...

Hey, Green is stuff I like. Red is comments. Blue is stuff I'm commenting on. When I’m crashing down Falling fast Please help me back To the ground This either ...

Hey, This just might be the first review I ever gave you. It might be a little short; I just wrote a pretty long review for Persephoneia and my fingers ...

Hey, I'm here a review! My comments are in red and stuff I like are in dark green. It'll look a bit like a Christmas tree by the time I'm ...

I'll give this a review but you should definitely change the rating to 18+ before a mod does. :) My comments are in red. You are in a bar. Enjoying ...

Hey, I think this is the first review I've ever given you, although I lurk your works (hey, that rhymed) often. I'm going to try a different way of reviewing ...

I'm iffy on the Maximum Ride series. They're pretty cliche and the last two were cheesy and romance-filled. I think for her age, Max's voice is really immature. She acts ...

Hey, I really like this. Perhaps move it to Short Stories or Other or something? I don't think it quite fits in General Articles. It's funny how well-written this is, ...

Hey, Honestly, this seems sort of creepy. Maybe you were going for that, probably not, but the whole 'YOU are my new him!' and the crazy amount of exclaimation points ...

Hey, This was absolutely fabulous. I was dying when it ended. Okay, so a couple of nitpicks though. 1. I'd reeeeally like to know whether the MC is a guy ...

Hey, Meh. I'm not sure whether I liked this. It's extremely cliche, the girl falling in love with her best friend's boyfriend, asking him to leave her alone, let her ...

Hey, Welcome to YWS! I wanted to tell you that if you want to show edits in your writing, instead of posting it as a whole new comment, press the ...

I saw your reply to the 'How'd you find YWS' and had to read this. XD (It's a pretty good poem, nonetheless (I never know if that's the correct spelling)) ...

Hey, Welcome to YWS! I'm Jasminebells but you can call me Jas for short. :) I really like this poem. It's short and cute and pretty straight forward. A couple ...

Hey, V and IV are definitely my favorites. They have the best imagery and the story told in both are really great. I didn't really understand VI very much but ...