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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: The French Revolution Song (parody of Hey Soul Sister)

    So funny! Thanks for a good laugh! :)

    May 28, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Laundry Love

    Great story! Loved the interaction and dialogue between the characters. I do agree with the others though; its incomplete so you need to post another part! Keep writing, Jane

    May 27, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Torn Veil (Part 1 of 3)

    Oh BTW ziggiefred, I really liked your poem Another Fight! Please keep writing! I believe I reviewed it!

    May 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Black Hole

    Wow, I really liked this a lot. It was good in a totally simplistic way, and you also got the point across easily. Good job, Jane

    May 23, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Torn Veil (Part 1 of 3)

    Thank you SOOOOOO Much!!!! :)

    May 23, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: deleted

    This piece honestly sounds like the Breaking Dawn wedding scene, kind of unoriginal.

    May 23, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Azaleas for Susie

    This was absolutely, positively beautiful. I have no nitpicks to point out. Great job! Please please please KEEP WRITING! -Jane

    May 22, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Belong

    Thanks for the input! Hopefully I'll edit this and then put it in the novels section.

    May 21, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Words Will Always Hurt You

    And this post is still going strong....Thank you! :) :) :) :) -Jane

    May 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Want to Fly

    Thanks for the reviews! I edited the poem a little bit!

    May 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Obama, Hummers, and Fawns: A Collection of Limericks

    Thanks????????

    May 12, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Backyard and Heat

    I edited a little bit of The Backyard!

    May 9, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Words Will Always Hurt You

    WoooHoo! 200 views! Thanks everyone for continuing to read this story! :)

    May 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Limericks of the Cullens

    Hahahaha! Good job! I don't rally feel like critiquing now, by I honestly liked the Renesmee limerick the best. When I read it, I burst out laughing. Good job, -Jane

    May 7, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Words Will Always Hurt You

    Thanks for all the reviews everyone!!! I'm very happy that this story happens to be FEATURED right now!!! :) My first FEAUTURED story since I joined! Thanks for reading, commenting, ...

    May 4, 2010


“Hope” is the thing with feathers - That perches in the soul - And sings the tune without the words - And never stops - at all -
— Emily Dickinson