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I just gotta say, these are awesome. For some reason, reading about the seasame street chacacters all grown up and ghetto is rather interesting. I don't want to stop reading ...

Thanks a bunch Carly!

...you're not serious are you?

Could definitely be a hit on YT!

Why thank you people! btw Pacific Sky, I noticed your signature thing is the Owl City song Tidal Wave! I love them, and that song. It's my fave part of ...

Thanks Vanadis! That was very helpful and I'm glad you liked it :) Thanks to Empress as well.

Thanks for the advice! I will see about working on it :)

Thanks everyone! I will consider your advice, though I do rather like it like this. Merry Christmas! :D

Thanks for the reply! I get what you mean. I thought that too, but I already put "remain" in the same phrase so it sounded weird. Then I found a ...

I think this work is exceptionally good! Very deep, good meaning. I don't really have a critique for you, but I do have a star! ;)

Thanks June! I do try to post my songs on youtube and put a link here so people can hear the song, so hopefully I can do that soon ;)

Thanks Carly! I think I will edit a few of the parts you mentioned, but I bet if you heard the song, some of it would make more sense. And ...

I read this and the last chapter and loved them both! It's a unique story and I genuinely want to keep reading! I have no critique for you, but I ...

Thank you and you're welcome! :)

That does sound similar to an Owl City song. And it's very good. I would love to see the rest of this song and hear it as well!