Published February 19, 2010
Hey, this is my first song. To give a backstory its about a guy who loved a girl till she moved to florida. Hope you like it 
Ooh baby i see you walk past.
I sure do hope the night will last
I smell your perfume it smells nice
you look nice i like your eyes
So i walk over to you
Your body makes me go woo
So i undress you with my mind
Looks like ive made a find
Wooooo wooo wooooo
Thats the sound i make when i see you-ooooo-ooo
I wanna take you home with me
Please please please Oh Please
Oo Yeh you like a sexy cat
No baby you aint nothing fat.
Yeh yeh yeh yeh yeh yeh
Please be rough i hate it fair
Laying on my bed
Not in my shed
Im like a bullet of lead
Yeah thats what i said
Ohhh lalalallalalal
Mmmhmmm Shalalalaal
You make me laugh
La- La Lalalalaa
Whoa whoa whoa
Slow it down right there
Yeh yeh yeh yeh
Cmon baby take off dat thong
Bing bong bong
I know you liking me
Thats what i see
So yeah baby baby
Lets get Crazy crazy
Woooo woooo woooo
Thats the sound i made when i saw youu
Oooo yeh yeh yehhhhh
Wheres my phone i said where?
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...you're not serious are you?
This song disgusts me.
You're how old? 13? Yeah...completely inappropriate.
This is inspired. I like the pure genius rhyme of bed and shed. I think you have a real career in the songwriting buisness, and i highly suggest you form a band if you havn't already. I think this would make an excellant metal song and would most certainly sell ATLEAST one hundred thousand records.