Jamie_rocks

Okay, thanks. Not harsh at all, just helpful. A question though: Why exactly do people tend to think that this comes off as Disney style? You've said that, multiple times. ...

Okay, I've changed my mind. I edited it. Please tell me what you think now.

Chapter Three The Witches, The Gifts, And The Staffs The Canaby sisters stood looking at the witches, and the witches looking at them. “Who are you?” asked one of the ...

Okay thanks. I did do the * thing after those first few paragraphs, though. As for Kamren though, I know a nine year old who is in love with Chris ...

Okay, thanks everyone. I can't rewrite now because I'm working on revising chapter two, but I'll fix the nitpicks.

Okay, thanks. This helps a lot. :) Thanks for telling me about the confusion, I'll have to fix those up.

Okay thanks everyone, especially the line-by-line. Avens: I just had a few comments on some of the points you made. 1. When you were commenting on the note, I couldn't ...

First off, thanks for the review. I just wanted to comment on some of the questions you asked. Why not just change “not doin’ out homework” to “not doin’ our ...

Okay thanks, I'm editing it now, and still working on the next part.

Okay, I'll do that. The next chapter is almost done, and once it is I'll edit this and post them together. As for the comments, we need all the girls, ...

Okay, thanks for everything. I'm working on chapter three now. When it's finished, I'm going to heavily edit the first two chapters, and post all three together.

Okay thanks for everything. I'm rewriting this as soon as I finish the third chapter of The Love Note, and this'll help. And by the way, I guess you can't ...

Okay thanks. Again, the third chapters almost done, and I'm working on revising these two. Sorry it's taking so long, I'm juggling a bunch of novels at once.

Okay, thanks. I edited all the typos. I'm horrible with that. I"m almost done with the next part, and I'll post it soon.

Okay, I'll think about that. Thanks. And yes, it is.