Jamie_rocks

Comments in red. *It's been ages since I've worked on my novel, but here's another go...CRITICIZE AWAY PLEASE=). This is completely unedited. The novel was previously known as Lone Teen--just ...

comments in red The air was cold and muggy. Everytime Should be "Every time..." she took a breath it felt stiff and thick. The rain fell down around her , ...

It's very short, but I want to keep track of it, so I'm posting it here. No remarks on how short it is, please. I've written it about five times, ...

It's very short, but I want to keep track of it, so I'm posting it here. No remarks on how short it is, please. I've written it about five times, ...

Chapter 5: Things get a little complicated. Comments in red A week passed by. High school was no more the perfect fantasized dream I thought it was. Home work was ...

I know this post was immediate. And it might not be my best since I wrote it in, like, five soon as I get enough reviews on this and the ...

Comments in red. “So, what are we going to do?” Ted asked Brant. “Does it really matter?” She shrugged her shoulders. “Well, yeah,” Ted said. Okay, you might want to ...

I know, it's hard to believe, considering romance is one of my least favorite genres and I've never actually read any romance novels before. I prefer to dabble in the ...

I need this reviewed because it is a contest entry at my school and I don ' t trust my teacher :D Comments in red Anne lifted the last box ...

Comments in red I bit down on my lip and turned over in bed with my mobile pressed firmly to my left ear. Yet again I was smiling ear to ...

Yes, this is a very preliminary version of the prologue for the story I was discussing in the Writers' Corner. It has yet to be named, or even have a ...

This is for the Creative Communications writing contest, in which I have the potential to get published and earn a lot of money. This is my first time doing it, ...

Comments in red Bobby waits outside the room, rubbing his hands together. The doctor’s been there for over an hour, stepping out every once in a while, asking for towels, ...

Comments in red “Such a crappy season,” Cormac sighs. “What?” “Autumn, man. It’s the crappiest season there is. What’s the point? I mean, summer’s hot and winter’s cold and spring’

~Hey, everyone. I decided awhile back that I didn't like my Fallen Sorrows. So I'm redoing everything. The characters will be the same but a whole other plot and different ...