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Re: Hands of Death - Part One: The Note
I left you a review they said. It'll be short they said. :P Thank you for the very helpful review. :D
Jul 2, 2021 -
Re: Hands of Death - Part One: The Note
Thank you for the review :D
Jun 30, 2021 -
Re: Hands of Death - Part One: The Note
Thank you for the review :D
Jun 30, 2021 -
Re: Dread
Thanks for the review! There is a part 2 actually. Its called miracles. I should put a link to it in this one maybe. There might he a p3 who ...
Apr 6, 2021 -
Re: Miracles
Thanks for the review! :D It was helpful. One thing though, its not first person. If it were, all the "Drey"s and that would be "I"s. "I stood." rather than ...
Apr 5, 2021 -
Re: Scared to fall again~
Please stop this, it is getting quite annoying when you post it on everything
Apr 2, 2021 -
Re: Miracles
Please stop with the NovelStar stuff you people
Apr 2, 2021 -
Re: Phoenix
Thanks for the review, its very helpful! This story was originally going to be a prologue, but i scrapped that idea, and instead it will probably be its own story ...
Apr 1, 2021 -
Re: Phoenix
Got it, thank you! I am pretty new to YWS, soooo... :D
Apr 1, 2021 -
Re: Phoenix
How *do* you tag someone though?
Apr 1, 2021 -
Re: Phoenix
Hah, no. The universe is much to large and written out for that. :P I'm working on the actual prologue rn.
Apr 1, 2021 -
Re: Phoenix
Well, the issue with this being the prologue is that it doesnt fit with the main story. it doesnt really help i suppose. Don't worry, Malvor is still a character ...
Apr 1, 2021 -
Re: Miracles
Thanks for reviewing! Also, the "no" has been fixed. That was an issue I missed, thanks! I will definitely keep writing. About Drey? Maybe. :)
Apr 1, 2021 -
Re: Phoenix
Thanks for the review! Yeah, this was actually an old piece of mine. I planned on having it as a prologue to my novel, but looking back...that was a stupid ...
Apr 1, 2021
