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Re: Sometimes You Have to Let Go
This is rather depressing... :( I loved it though!!! Keep writing!! --Jalmoc
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Untitled--Fool's Duel
D: this was really sad!!! D ...: But I definitely loved the story. I would love to read more stories that are like this one. Well Keep Writing!!! --Jalmoc
May 18, 2011 -
Re: The Battle
Thanks Kyle, i appreciate that. haha. my class periods are actually an hour and ten minutes
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: Death Song
Sorry, but I keep reading over this story. I absolutely love it! I really really hope that you write more! I just love the whole Death Song feature! It kinda ...
Oct 20, 2010 -
Re: The Tears of Battle
Hey, I'm rushed on time, but I really loved this story. You really know how to build suspense. Keep writing!
Oct 18, 2010 -
Re: The Button (12+ for war/violence themes)
Hey there, everyone pretty much covered what was wrong. haha. Im not that great at reviwing anyway, but this was a great story! I look forward to reading more if ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: How Rain was Created
I love how you combined school and the bible in this story!!! I'm not really any good at nitpicking either, so I'll let other people dot that! Keep writing1!!!
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: And There Were Screams...
This was a great story! I love how you describe everything! If this was just a random story that your wrote in class, imagine what you can do when you ...
Sep 28, 2010 -
Re: The Immortality of Her Sweet Embrace
WOW! Just saying. ;)
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: Death
Hey, I really enjoyed this story. Let me know when you're gonna write more to this or another. Great imagery also. :D
Sep 17, 2010