Jadefox

Hey there! I'm really procrastinating on writing an article for my school's paper right now, so I'd thought I'd see if there was anything in the Green Room I'd want ...

Hi Castor, Thank you for posting this piece :) I enjoyed the nostalgic imagery and the current criticisms. The recurrent imagery of the "cardboard castles" and food ( :) )definitely ...

Hi Tucker, It's been awhile since I've been on YWS, so I'm happy to start reviewing again with your piece :) First off, I appreciate your dialogue on what is ...

Hey Strange, I meant to write this a few days ago, but didn't have time. I only come back to it because your poem is one of my favorites I've ...

Hi there! I love reading works-in progress or possible to-be-continued works because there's so much potential. I was captivated by your description of Feliciano's actions. They definitely accomplishe

Hey there! I read some of your other poems, but I thought I would leave a review for this work. First off, the imagery is well utilized in each line. ...

Howdy! First off, for the lack of of revision you claim to have, the chapter read fairly well. This is probably because of your clear writing style. I appreciate how ...

Hey there! I thought I might review some past works because I stalk the pages of the past... I'll start with positive, because that's mainly all I have for you. ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! My name is Jadefox, but just call me Jade; everyone does. First off, I would like to applaud you on your fabulous description throughout the ...

Mwahaha. I enjoyed it. In my college English class, we were attempting to define the boundaries of what "qualifies" as a poem. Your satirical tone throughout this "poem," (I simply ...

Hello, LLW, Welcome to YWS and I hope you have enjoyed your time here so far. If you have any questions about the following review, writing, YWS, or life just ...

Hey there! I will try to keep this review brief as I see you have a large amount down below. I like to start off what I like about it ...

Hey there! I'm not sure if we've met. I'm Jadefox, here to do a review. Let's get started shall we? The first component of the piece I enjoyed was the ...

Hi mystogan! I've finally gotten around to finishing your story. I sat down to read and review each chapter individually but I found myself captivated by the plot twists and ...

Hey there, Here I am! Wow, it took me a long time to untangle myself from life and return to reviewing. So hello and I'm reviewing what I should have ...