JadeBunny

This is a really good prologue! There were some grammatical errors, like “But perhaps one day in the future, one of you, will be able to find it. Any more ...

You double posted. Also, that's the first thing I think of when I hear the name Jason, probably because I'm writing a book based on Jason and the Argonauts.

Jason? As in Jason and the Argonauts?

The "accumulate" part. I thought you might have picked the wrong synonym from a thesaurus.

I think the wording confused me.

They found the sword? I thought they created the sword together.

You misspelled "Prologue" and there are some confusing sentences. For example, These were rare and dangerous gifts that one should have the responsibility to control one of the four main ...

About that light=good and dark=evil thing: I know it starts out that way, but the whole point of the story is that it isn't true. Really? Well, that's certainly unique. ...

I like this poem a lot! The message is beautiful, and the rhythm flows well. I also liked how you said your dream might come true one day. Overall, a ...