JacyBuschman

Hello! I hope my review can help you see the view from both a writer and reader. The piece is beautiful and well written. I think some more descriptive, lengthy ...

Hello! I wanted to get back into reading people's ideas and your title caught my eye! Here's a quick review. None of it is meant to offend, but critic as ...

This is well-written considering the difficulty of the topic. But, if you were to convince average or even above average people of your topic, you'll need a lot more background ...

Hello Liberty! What a cute, warm-hearted encounter. I am already jealous my first apartment didn't come with all these things, especially the kitties! I like the style and voice of ...

Hello LordWolf! What a beautiful and relatable poem. The imagery is spot on in this, and it feels inviting. With poems, think of a new line as a comma almost. ...

Hello Dfchristian and good afternoon! :D Just somethings I would like to review on with you is your prologue. Most prologues aren't the first-person style. Of course, there aren't any ...

Good afternoon! What an interesting read! There are a few things I noticed here in this chapter, it is long. I don't mind it being, but there is heavy dialogue ...

Hello! I do like this snippet, it's a quick, easy read. It's not overcomplicated and sounds "modern" like if that makes sense. Some sentences that jumped out "Ready to tell ...

This is truly great, I really like it and connect with it. I think it just needs tidying really, nothing too heavy. To really pop out maybe one liners, to ...

Hello! The title caught my attention at first. This is a great start to what you are working on. There are typical grammatical errors, and some HEAVY use of transitional ...