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JackBerry

  • Lyrics » Romantic, Realistic Re: Blue

    Hello, I would like to make a review on your lyrics. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme in the lyrics. It also didn't take up the entire thing which is good. ...

    May 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: "Deleted"

    Hello, first of all everything in your poem is true. The only thing changing the world is humans. I'd like to say that I liked how you went from one ...

    May 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Trouble

    Hello, I want to give a review on your poem. The emotion was real strong, and it made me remember how bad this feeling is. I enjoyed the rhyming, and ...

    May 29, 2013


Everything in the universe has a rhythm, everything dances.
— Maya Angelou