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Brad! Paragraph Eins Grammar and First Impressions[/b] The first frost from winter was breathing through the city like a [?] disease. The cold stillness made the asphalt glitter black, [no ...

Twist! My last double/triple/quadruple post! :D ‘Water jug, bed, window… For thruppence.’ For : With the object or purpose of Four : The number after 3 and before 5. :D ...

Twist! I feel kinda bad for double/triple/quadruple posting. Hopefully you won't bang on me for that (or any other mod for that matter)? :D It was warm, [no comma] with ...

Twist! Thank you for clearing that up for me. :lol: This will be for the first part, then. You can find my overall comments at the end. :D Grammar and ...

Brad! I'm sorry for getting this up so late, but I had a few things needing to get accomplished within my life outside of YWS. It hurt me to stay ...

Aww, thanks Aet! It makes me happy to see you critiquing again! And it makes me even more happy that you critted something of mine! :D Yeah, I never edited ...

Hello again! The only sound is the steady roar from the receptionist’s computer, [no comma] and the occasional hiccup of a crying mother. For a conjunctive like and to get ...

I have returned upon request! I shall now critique like I never have before! :D The last sentence that Jack understood had had something to do with Anne, and then ...

O.O No way. Jabber, is it just me, or are you critique-crazy? Psh, I wish... I've been falling dreadfully behind. But! I'm catching up now. I did a couple during ...

Please don't look at the times and dates when I say that I finally got 'round to editing this. Thanks for all your comments, guys. I'm glad you liked it. ...

Question: Would you guys suggest (prefer) for me to go back and fix up/improve chapters as soon as I finish them and get feedback? This means you'd read the chapter, ...

Hey, 3B! Sorry I haven't been able to post it, but the site was down when I was able to put it up, and then I got loaded with homework ...

Hey, Valor! :) I'll vote on your poll after I type up this crit, but I'd like to say that I really don't mind. You can post it in Advanced ...

Hey, 3B! ^^ Happy to help! Wanted to double check (since I'm not English, had to use Wikipedia :P) so I could help you out as to how to change ...

Hey, 3B! The comp's sucking my brain out again, so forgive me if the crit seems wild and wacky. Ayra: Hah, I'm sorry. I'll try to leave room for you ...