JabberHut

Hello again! Told you I'd leave a reply. ;D I thought this story was adorable. It actually reminded me a lot of the movie Spirit: Stallion of the Cimarron , ...

Hi, Stori! Long time, no see! I'm not sure what you're experimenting, so we'll see if I even have valuable advice for you. xD I think the setup was adorable. ...

Hi, Matthews! I really liked this so far! A businessman's daughter going out with another businessman. I think it's got lots of drama potential! I also like how you started ...

Hello! I'm here as asked. =) I'll go ahead and review this with a sort of grammar check, then I'll edit my review on your other chapter with a grammar ...

Hi, Teddy! I'm really sorry this wasn't up last night as I had hoped. However, I remembered today! So hopefully it's not too late. ^_^ I typically don't do line-by-lines. ...

Hello! I haven't read the first chapter, but I thought this was pretty good. I was hooked due to how worried I was about your MC. Something bad was happening, ...

Hello! I haven't read the first two chapters, so I won't be giving as good a review as I could be. However, I've still got a couple comments that you ...

Hello! I played a few rounds of that game before I realized I should be reviewing this. xD Right now, I'm at the white walls part. It's sadly addicting. Anyway! ...

Hi, Nike! :D This story was so cute! I really liked some of the description of Charles you used. The hypnotic eyes ("blue blue blue blue" part was awesome), the ...

Okay! I. am here. Fluteluvr77 says aww! And so does Jabber. This was a very cute poem! I liked it. I thought your use of words was excellent. The variety ...

Hey, fictionfanatic! It's been a while! :D This story is sad. I've been in an accident before, so I definitely know how scary it is. The description you had brought ...

Hey, Drawers! :D Before I begin, I thought I'd quick mention that I changed the rating to +18 due to the foul language. No biggie. ;D So! The story. Was. ...

Hey, AceWolf! I thought I'd stop by and read since no one besides Nate has commented, and after reading this myself, you definitely deserve some feedback! I enjoyed this piece ...

I'm here! Hopefully you'll see this before class. :D Grammar in the spoiler. Most of it is just misplaced commas. If you want a pause where I mentioned getting rid ...

Hi there! I thought this was an interesting piece. Usually the whole school loser thing turns me off, but I think your use of the bully made it a little ...