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ERIKA! So I totes like this. The opener line was a killer (lolololololol), so that was awesome. The following paragraph was hard to read grammatically, so the intro wasn't as ...

Hello! Happy Review Day! :D This piece is very interesting. It actually started off with an intriguing discussion, and I was starting to think that was the main topic of ...

Hello! Happy Review Day! ;) I like what you have here. It's definitely got that eerie feeling to it that you did very well with. You chose some good words ...

Hi, Mikko! I really enjoyed this! It was cute and certainly fun to read. I can only imagine how it would sound put to music! It's a cute little song ...

Hey, Dasia! Back to see some more. ;) So I'm loving this simplistic style you have with your lyrics. You don't get too wordy with explaining things but keep it ...

Hey, Vettan! I like what you have here, even if it's kinda rambly. XD I think that's the point though, so you definitely nailed that. You say this is a ...

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Hey, Bunnie! I like what you have here, and it's an awesome start. Later on in the song, I started to like where it was going. At least, I could ...

Sachi. Sachisachi. I absolutely loved this. Like totes. By itself, it certainly doesn't seem to serve any purpose. xD It's nice fluffy character interaction, but all the characters were so ...

Hey, Fred! Here as requested. :) Though I must warn you that my poetry skills are a bit limited. Hopefully, what I say will make some sense! I'm not sure ...

Hey, Soulkana! Here as promised. :D So I definitely think this is an improvement from what I first read in your prologue. I like where it's going, and it's certainly ...

Hello! Here as requested! :) I don't see this as a novel piece, so I'm going to critique it as a poem. Whichever it is, I hope my review will ...

Hey, Becca! Sorry for the slight delay. Life likes to get in the way sometimes. :) So a paper for university! I remember these. Goodness, did the prompts get interesting! ...

Hello, Rain! How're things? This was written very well. You've got a fun style and voice that works pretty well here. Your imagery is astounding though. I think you certainly ...

Hi, Lele! You did a very good job with this song. The message was extremely clear, and the imagery used was fantastic. You've got some great stuff -- awesome moments ...