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OMG THAT FLASHBACK. Okay, if that doesn't also turn out to be Isha and Gideon, imma... be wrong. But that's my bet. So I love how darn CRUEL Ignance is ...

Hello! I really love how beautiful this poem feels. It really brings out a peaceful picture in my mind that complements the message it's trying to portray. Your word choice ...

omg carter has so much power in this group all of a sudden His eyelids felt heavy and he was less worried about Gideon then he was about sleeping. He ...

WOW. There was SO much tension in the air that I couldn't even stop reading to take notes. My first thought about this whole thing is that I really hope ...

NO, CARTER. We should definitely be wondering whose bed who was sleeping in. THERE ARE VERY IMPORTANT SHIPPING MATTERS TO ATTEND TO. The fact that Carter could hear Gideon's jaw ...

Koshar sat in between the two of them on the rock, as if unsure whose lap he should sit on. KOSHAR!!

It feels weird to say Zoltar is living with a Sea Talon since it's only been a couple days? And in fact, he only slept in their cave maybe a ...

I'm so upset that this isn't a comedic poem about monkey farts. :( So I like what you're trying to do here. It's a unique spin on the topic of ...

Oh my gosh Gideon and Isha are adorable. As soon as Isha hugged him and HE HUGGED HER BACK I squealed like a little school girl. I AM SO EXCITED ...

OH PLEASE LET IT BE GIDEON. T.T Gosh, I really just loved this entire segment. There's so much info we got out of this, and it was incredibly engaging. We ...

I love how you set up the Crossroads here. I know it's not a new chapter and is actually halfway through, but it's such a nice start to picturing the ...

The pacing of this segment was awesome, really! Considering we just got out of camp after a night of dialogue and calmness, the ride was equally calm but contained some ...

OMG I HOPE WHISPER IS A WITCH. HER CAT FOLLOWED THEM. LOL omg I love that Isha is just perfectly okay with the cat appearing randomly into their traveling zoo. ...

GOOD MORNING! Zoltar found himself at a bit of a loss. Should he make a noise to let her know he was here, should he quietly walk up to her ...

Hello again!! This was a nice chill chapter. Good to know they managed to get away without anymore trouble! I loved the interaction at the river where Gideon apologized. Carter ...