JabberHut

Hey, Alice. Since you've edited, I'm not going to check the other two reviews to see if I repeated anything, so forgive me if I do. ^_^ Oh, and it's ...

Hey, 3B! The comp's killing my eyes, so I apologize for anything not making sense. :) Elias Isaac was a man of incredible wealth and power. He was elected as ...

Hello, there! :D I'm not going to give a full-out critique pretty much because I'd be repeating myself over and over and I only have five minutes. :lol: AWritersFantasy has ...

Let's see how much of this I get done. :lol: *at school* Pushing him back to the others , she ran off down the hall with Ruby hot on her ...

Lol! You actually titled your story with my suggestion? You're amazing! *hugs* It isn’t broken, [s]it’s never[/s] and it hasn't slipped from your fingers, slicing the air and tumbling with ...

I heard you rewrote this, and it has greatly improved. There were a couple spots that I cursed myself for missing. So this is really an extension of my previous ...

Yay! The third part! :D The stowaways could hear the sound of groans coming from [s]the[/s] inside of the transports... [s]And[/s] falling would give him away. Or combine with the ...

Gah, I meant to talk to you about your story, but my chat froze and you were gone after I refreshed. :x “Yeah, but we have some old homework assignments ...

Here I am on your request. Griff's taken care of the in-depth military shtuff that I don't know too much about, but I do feel weird critiquing after Griff's words, ...

The third part! Woot! And quite an exciting one, at that. :D She comes over to the table to join both our best friend, Giselle, and myself, [period instead] “What ...

I've been meaning to read this, but it slipped my mind...:oops: I'm here, though, and we'll see what I catch that the others haven't. :wink: The stress is visibly gone ...

Alrighty! I'm finally caught up! :D I'm skipping the first paragraph, by the way, since it was in the previous chapter. :) The majestic yellow light that shimmered from the ...

I never got to this?? Oh, man, I'm sooo sorry! :x The beast stumbled to the ground, and , with a clamber , [s]tried to[/s] reach ed for his sword. ...

I'm he-ere! :twisted: One might tell you – if they so wished- - that a tear was merely a result of chemical reactions that informed the tear duct that it ...

Hello! I'm sorry I critiqued part 2 without looking at this. Actually, I'm more sorry for myself, 'cause the second part was really good. I knew this wouldn't be hard ...