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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 9.2

    I'm so glad she's getting some sleep!! This entire segment was so needed in a number of ways. There are so many sweet moments that really covered some needed topics ...

    Oct 31, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 9.1

    HIIII!! You are totally right, I think you did a really good job reinforcing her dyscalculia in this chapter. In fact, I think you did a great job doing so ...

    Oct 30, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy
    Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 18 - Stir

    Hi!! Thought I'd stop by again after the awesome taste I got in chapter 17. :D I like how this opened up. There's definitely a unique magic to your world ...

    Oct 29, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy
    Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 17 - Echo

    Hey, Thorne! Thought I'd stop by the green room, and I have to admit, I've been really intrigued by your novel every time I see it in passing. Now having ...

    Oct 28, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 8.2

    HELLO! I LOVED THIS SEGMENT AHHHHHH Jerica totally needed this and Derik totally needed this and I totally needed this. It was so sweet, so sad, so comforting, so full ...

    Oct 27, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 8.1

    HELLO I AM HERE! So not a lot happened in this segment, but that doesn't mean there isn't value here. We're obviously taking the time to address a severely important ...

    Oct 26, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 52.2)

    I can't believe this is already over. :( And you had such a beautiful scene here to end on, how everything was gray and melancholy and sad. The imagery was ...

    Oct 25, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 52.1)

    THE LAST CHAPTER AHHHH! I can't believe this moment is here! I am so scared for what I'm about to read! Okay, I read the thing and I am so ...

    Oct 24, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 7.2

    Look, I'm catching up!! :D The first half of this is full of some really good stuff. I love that Akeno takes the time to comfort her. But honestly, this ...

    Oct 23, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 51)

    Hello! I am here! And will comment as I read tonight! The letter at the start is so heartbreaking. D: (I think I remember this letter being a thing, but ...

    Oct 23, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 50)

    I can't believe you did this to me. D: I mean I can, but... imma brb. [ walks away ] hello i am back So this was full of feels ...

    Oct 21, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 49)

    HELLO IT IS I! I still can't believe we're almost at the end. What are you doing to me. Surely there is a sequel?!? You played the emotions so well ...

    Oct 20, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 7.1

    Mmmmmm yessssssss what a juicy dramatic segment we have here. You did a great job with the emotion here. I don't feel like any of them were out of line, ...

    Oct 20, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 6.2.2

    Oohhhhhh Rek's gonna be okay!! Clearly, I should have wait until this segment. XD (Note that I WILL be heartbroken if he still dies here!) But right now, I see ...

    Oct 18, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 6.2.1

    THIS IS AWESOME . I mean, I'm really REALLY upset that you're doing the thing at the end there like YOU BETTER NOT DO THE THING I like him so ...

    Oct 17, 2020


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