JRaye

I liked it The machines flourish and the humans decline. The youth waits for their bodies to resign. The work is increasing, the people diminishing. Now, thousands more died, endlessly ...

I enjoyed it, but man, reading this can cause guilt like you wouldn't believe. It's good though, it adds to the feeling of the poem, and I like how it ...

A great poem, i really enjoyed it, espeacially how she fought back at the end. but wings are for angles not for whores. i'm going to assume you meant angels ...

I like the poem, but i get a little confused in the second stanza. At first you talk about closeing up and not letting anyone in, then suddenly you start ...

Wow, i really enjoyed that poem. but there was two lines that were a bit confusing. The thing that's haunting Is me without you. It's the is that doesn't sound ...

I liked it, it brings up a good point about the little things in life but i'm having trouble connecting the second stanza to the rest of the poem. Did ...

I liked it, i could relate to it well, where at the time you don't like a person, then you realize later that they were trying to help you. I ...

I enjoyed the poem, but maybe you don't have to continue rhymeing. If you took the last line you have written, and put that into a new stanza, it would ...

I enjoyed it, when i was reading it, I felt as if i had just joined the circus and was getting a walk though of how everything worked. it definetly ...