JM

Hey there. I like the premise of your story. A young boy wants to go on a adventure. Who can't relate to that? Ha. I read your previous chapter is ...

Hey! I am just going to say that I straight away liked the idea behind your story. I am not a keen reader of crime fiction but this sounded interesting. ...

Reading this, I actually squirmed from the graphic way you describe the poor guy's pain and torment. It was quite distressing or maybe I am just too sensitive. But yes, ...

Hey there! I like the intensity of love the character feels for this other character. There is a element of mystery there about the guy. It is easy to make ...

I am going to begin with saying that I really liked this. I could feel the adventure as if I was right there in the story. I got a sense ...

This is a very short and sweet prologue. I like it a lot. Odd, but I could actually imagine someone fighting in a battlefield, in a dreamy slow-motion sequence. Your ...

Hey there! Here are just some of my thoughts. I am intrigued first most. I am asking myself a lot of questions in regards to who the characters are, the ...