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This is such a beautiful work of imagery. The adjectives, the placement of words, the metaphor and analogy. The TITLE! Described in one word, this poem is captivating. There were ...

Thank you for sharing your thoughts! It means a lot to me. I'm sorry for such a late response. Blame it on writer's block. :P :)

Thank you for replying! I'm sorry I haven't been active on here for a long time. Ironic... Your review made me very happy though. :)

Hi mintanchor! Thank you for the concise but to-the-point review. I'm glad you feel like I have done justice to your own thoughts too. :) As for the lines you ...

Hey SnazzyPencil, First of all, thank you for such an exuberant review! I am glad you liked the poem in general. :) About the usage of 'them,' well, can't say ...

Hello lexxxn, Thank you for reviewing my poem and also finding it likable. :) I understand what you mean when you say I should make it flow better, but there ...

Hi backroadstraveler! First of all, thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem. I'm glad you like it for the most part! Now, about the technicalities. The ...

I think it's perfect :)

Thanks TheRecluse! Surprisingly, I did find a paid gig right after publishing this poem. xD Thought that was pretty interesting. Thanks for liking my work. Keep reviewing!

Hello priceofwords, First of all what a cool username! :D Thanks for the in-depth review, and thank you for liking my work. You've given me a great perspective of how ...

Thanks Staarryskyy, constructive criticism is more than welcome. :) I kept the poem uneven deliberately to make it metaphorical for the frenzy that job-finding is, but yes, from the literary ...

:) You're a great writer who deserves to be well received in every writing you produce.

Loving how simply the whole concept was expressed right there! The transition between small-lined stanzas to longer-lined verses was a pretty clever choice almost representing the transition from raw