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Re: The Unattainable Man
This was an enjoyable read, but suddenly it makes sense to me now why darkness sells. :) I'm a fan of your other poems. You have explored dark territory in ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: She wants more
I expressed earlier on another poem of yours that I was apprehensive of reading more of your work. Oh boy was I right. This poem doesn't even try to be ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Not enough room for three
A poem to blow your mind, like the first time your plane lands in New York City. Firstly, let me specify that I am not habitual of giving 'titles' to ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Depression is a Liquid
Raw sincerity is one of the scariest things in the world. You, my friend, have captured exactly that with this poem. How relatable this is, is scary. Being a writer ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Without a Door
The 'nursery rhyme' feel of the poem makes it very fun to read! It's short but compensates with the length of each line. That is very amusing. The format in ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Mirrored
Let me start by making this statement clear as day: your rhyme scheme is an absolute marvel! It adds coherence to the whole lyrical musing. The way the 'story' of ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: The Pain of the Left Behind
You've written in the form of a song, the sincerity is raw and absolutely stunning. One can almost hear the melody. :) The empathy is strong, nobody who has ever ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Sometimes I Just
Written in the style of a stream of consciousness, this poem perfectly depicts the state of a hazy mind and disruptions faced in thought during raw exposure to life's various ...
Jul 28, 2015 -
Re: ...
New to this website, excuse my illiteracy of blog-language. This poem is set in a rather calm, soft tone, giving it the connotation of reassurance and comfort. This can be ...
Jul 28, 2015
